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I wish to express that art is self-indulgence, and that one shouldn't expect others to care about your art. I need to sum up this idea in a curt phrase suitable for a point in a list. The phrase I've got right now is

Art is self-indulgence; don't expect others to care about yours.

or

Art is self-indulgence; don't expect others to care.

I'm afraid this isn't clear. How can I rephrase this so it is unambiguous.

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If you're worried the second version might be taken to mean care about anything (unlikely), or care about work by other artists (possible, but wouldn't really change the effective meaning), then just stick with the first version. – FumbleFingers Jan 18 '12 at 17:37

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Since the principle you seem to be expressing works both ways, I'd emphasize it by stating it both ways; I'd state it in terms of need instead of expect; and I wouldn't use an imperative, which has you as a subject, but rather indefinite nonspecific one:

Art is self-indulgence; one needn't care about others' art, and vice versa.

or, if you'd rather be more didactic and explicit (brevity is not everything):

Art is self-indulgence. One needn't care about others' art, and one shouldn't expect others to care about one's own art.

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You could also move "your" to the first of the sentence, and reference it with an it:

Your [art/Art] is self-indulgence; don't expect others to care about it.

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