I specialize in system programming by using C++.
This is a résumé of an applicant. Is it grammatically correct?
This is a résumé of an applicant. Is it grammatically correct? |
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cout << "It's not great, but surely you're not employing them for their english skill. :P"; The way it's phrased (esp. "by") suggests that they specialised by using C++; that their use of c++ has made them a specialist. For example: "I specialised in tropical medicine by studying for another year at University X". It's almost certainly not what they're trying to say: something like "I specialise in system programming in C++" or "with C++" or "using C++" would probably be better, or even "I specialise in C++ system programming." But really, it's very nitpicky. |
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The grammar is technically OK, but the phrase "using c++" suggests its author is a neophyte. People who actually do systems programming for a living usually say that they write C++. Indeed, this is nitpicky, but writing software could be said to be nitpicking to its extreme. The people who eventually select candidates for interviews are generally software people, so they're bound to nitpick at least a little. |
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It is grammatical but awkward. And the way it's phrased makes the meaning ambiguous. Is it saying that the applicant is specializing by using C++? Or is this the applicant's way of merely saying that he or she uses C++ when system programming? Perhaps it would be better expressed the following way:
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