Take for example:
I met Raschel three years ago. He represented a small company of which he was also the proprietor. He came to show the presentation of his product plan. Many companies, big and small, sent their representatives to grab this opportunity. The board held a meeting and decided to call upon companies specializing in these products.
I have few queries:
Is it appropriate to start the second line with "He came" or it should be "He had come"?
The last line, when checked with www.paperrater.com, gets underline under "held a meeting". What is the proper way to replace these words?