Eventually we're hoping to compile a list of schools[?] ones that would benefit considerably from ...
Where [?] is, would a semi-colon suit? What punctuation mark would be correct here and why?
A simple comma perhaps?
Where A simple comma perhaps? |
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I suggest using "such - which" as in Eventually we're hoping to compile a list of such schools which would benefit considerably from |
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