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In my personal statement, under the hobbies section, I am highlighting web development. I wrote something like this:

Among my hobbies, I find web development to be the most interesting and I currently hold certification in it from Microsoft.

This doesn't seem good. Does one hold/achieve/possess certification? Can someone suggest a better way to phrase this without having to stretch it out into multiple sentences?

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How about "... I am currently a Microsoft Certified [whatever]"? –  Andrew Leach Nov 5 '13 at 11:40
    
What's wrong with I have been certified in web development by Microsoft? That said, I would specify the actual certification you hold. –  Hugh Nov 5 '13 at 11:40
    
@AndrewLeach "I am a Microsoft Certified Professional" seems a little pompous, though that is what the transcript says. –  DarkCthulhu Nov 5 '13 at 11:43
    
@Hugh certified in web-development doesn't sound right to me. Is it acceptable? –  DarkCthulhu Nov 5 '13 at 11:44
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It's in a formal register. I can't really comment on how it will make you look without comparing it to other personal statements but I would err on the side of including it as most would find it interesting. (It's certainly correct English usage!) –  Hugh Nov 5 '13 at 12:06

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Among my hobbies, I find web development, in which I am Windows Certified, to be the most interesting

Is that a good solution for you? :)

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Whoops I meant Microsoft Certified but you get the idea. –  MilanSxD Nov 5 '13 at 15:39
    
That sounds pretty good. :) –  DarkCthulhu Nov 6 '13 at 3:43

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