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I would like to contact my recruiter (via email) asking for updates on my application. What should I put in the title so it is informative, but also at the same time does not sound like I am too impatient? (I also would like to provide additional information about my accomplishments in the email)


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closed as off topic by FumbleFingers, MετάEd, Brian Hooper, Kris, RegDwigнt May 20 '13 at 20:02

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I think this is seriously Off Topic. ELU is supposed to be about interesting aspects of English usage, not writing advice for job applicants. – FumbleFingers May 17 '13 at 17:53
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An email title like one of the following may serve.

Status of my application?
Current status of 123's application?
How is my application progressing?

If you like, tack on “And new accomplishments” or similar at the end; for example:

Status of my application? (New data enclosed)

In email titles, both brevity and specificity matter. Leave out irrelevant or non-specific words. Leave out articles a and the.

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Thanks for your answer\! – One Two Three May 17 '13 at 18:21

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